4/7/14- Monday- B day

ENG 9
Sorry, you have missed today's quiz on Essay format.
Classwork: Read the student essay on the short story "The Interlopers" and respond to the following:

1.What is missing from the introduction?

2.Write a thesis for this essay.

3.How can paragraph 2 be stronger?

4.What is missing from the paragraph structure in paragraph 4?

5.How can the conclusion be stronger?

Then revise your Rough Draft of the Mockingbird essay (How does Tom Robinson and the Scottsboro boys represent the symbol of the mockingbird?)

1. Does your essay have a thesis?

2. Does your thesis include the author’s name, name of the text, and your three points?

3. Do the main ideas of your body paragraphs match your 3 points in your thesis?

4. Do you have evidence for each body paragraph?

5. Does your essay match the 5 paragraph essay format?

Journal: What are the three parts of a thesis?

*Put the classwork and journal on the same sheet of paper. Use the back and front.

 

ENG 10

Complete the MUST Assessment

Classwork: Read the student essay on the short story "The Interlopers" and respond to the following:

1.What is missing from the introduction?

2.Write a thesis for this essay.

3.How can paragraph 2 be stronger?

4.What is missing from the paragraph structure in paragraph 4?

5.How can the conclusion be stronger?

Then revise your Rough Draft of the Mockingbird essay (How does Tom Robinson and the Scottsboro boys represent the symbol of the mockingbird?)

1. Does your essay have a thesis?

2. Does your thesis include the author’s name, name of the text, and your three points?

3. Do the main ideas of your body paragraphs match your 3 points in your thesis?

4. Do you have evidence for each body paragraph?

5. Does your essay match the 5 paragraph essay format?

Journal: What are the three parts of a thesis?

*Put the classwork and journal on the same sheet of paper. Use the back and front.